Writing the Invisible person into a story

Hi all
This is a shout out to anyone that might be able to offer some adveice.
I can’t seem to get 1 project finished before I move on to another.
I had started a children’s adventure story and during the work on that had another idea so skipped on. I eventually started another short story, which I have finished but I am not entirely happy with it.

The main character suffers from a psychiatric illness, basically talking to someone that does not exist, I was trying to write the dialogue between them without actually letting it out early on that the person is not real.
Any tips?
It just doesn’t seem to flow as easily as i would like it to.
All input welcome

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